America East Champions!
Posted 11 March 2007 - 05:08 PM
-Yeah (capitalize the first word of a sentence)
-Some sort of punctuation between "game" and "me," preferably a period.
-My bois and I, first person is second perogative.
-Applebee's (Possesive proper noun; needs an apostrophe and capitalization)
-Some sort of punctuation between "Applebees" and "the girls," preferably a period.
-were not or weren't
13/32 errors bringing your mistake rate to 41%. A few comments. First of all, this was your longest post since being under the mandated "Grammar Authority" that I am. Not only that, but you have also commited the most errors in this post.
Lastly, this whole faking like you were with girls that aren't your mom and/or sister. We've been over this several times, most notably in the BDCB thread (R.I.P big thread in the sky), yet you continue to try to create an image of yourself as a "playa." However, you lie like a sieve holds water, not very well.
And my pubes are Ivy League students
Posted 11 March 2007 - 05:47 PM
Nope, I have my Student ID
I would if it wasn't in Columbus, Ohio lol
Posted 11 March 2007 - 06:08 PM
-comma after HHF, you are addressing him
-question mark at the end
2/11 errors...18% mistake rate