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santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:49 PM) I think i saw some breakdown that he just runs out to far and then keeps his hands way too far down
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:50 PM) Balotelli and Sterling are going to have to be incredible
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:50 PM) yeah he's really poor at coming out, timing, all of it
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:50 PM) but as a shot stopper hes incredible
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:50 PM) Ramos is out i believe
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:51 PM) I like varane but hes doubtful also
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:51 PM) yeah Pepe and Varane at the back for Madrid
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:51 PM) ITS GONNA BE GUD 05
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:51 PM) Arbeloa(LFC former player) and Marcelo
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:51 PM) nervous
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:52 PM) i gotta shower then i'm running down to the bar
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:52 PM) Ronaldo rarely performed vs us at United
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:52 PM) enjoy it
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:53 PM) you would like my sanctuary here in nola
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:53 PM) they put the megamix on for me on the large screen
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:53 PM) then i get all the individual screens with the separate games
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:54 PM) ill be around on the ipad for the TOP BANTZ 05
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:54 PM) i'm the only fool there drinking on tuesday/wednesday afternoons
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:55 PM) I'd knuckle up next to ya buddy. Although I do prefer being alone for LFC haha
Jetsman05 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 12:55 PM) that sounds like a solid spot
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 01:02 PM) yeah i feel that i thought more people would make it better but during the wc it filled up with filthy casuals
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 01:03 PM) dont touch me casual! and i ran out of there
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HarlemHxC814 Icon : (22 October 2014 - 03:52 PM) It's so lovely to see you two getting along
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santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 04:03 PM) yeah but we both decided that we hate you
santana Icon : (22 October 2014 - 04:03 PM) KILL YO SELF
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Posted 29 August 2010 - 11:16 PM

On weekends I work for www.footballgameplan.com and today I filmed my first video. I was very nervous so I ended up forgetting some of my material and also excuse my stuttering lol. I just want some feedback from you guys so I can get better with each video I film.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:23 AM

Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:40 AM

[quote name='Rhodes1991' date='30 August 2010 - 01:23 AM' timestamp='1283145781' post='308741']
Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Thanks Rhodes, I was thinking the exact same thing. I also did a NCAA Top 25 video that came out better actually because I was less nervous. Once its available, I'll post it up. My next NFL Power Rankings wont be up till after week 1 though. I'll post them as I do them. Thanks again for your feedback. I welcome any and all constructive criticism.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 09:38 AM

Maybe we have more fans here that want to try this also . so I put up this page but it is dated in 2008 . My opinion is when ESPN came out in 1979-80 I watched it but couldn't grasp the concept of sports 24/7/ 365 on TV . So Maybe history will repeat it self with Football game plan on the internet. Having a partner to bounce your opinions off of may be a better way to sell your opinions as credible . If you believe in this than follow your Dream.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:31 AM

Not bad. Here are few things I noticed:

1. Slow... down... take... a breath... or... a pause... you're... talkingwaytoofastcauseyou'renervous.
2. Stop saying the word "just".
3. WTF is up with you bopping your head?
4. Use your hands a little bit with your analysis. You look ackward as hell with your hands just clasped on your desk. Use them a tad for emphasis.
5. Real men don't wear bracelets.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:42 AM

Probably worth breaking something this up into 3 sections. Makes it so you can elaborate more on each team, and not be in such a hurry.

Not bad though man, good work.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 01:23 PM

you said you believe the cowboys are the best team in the NFC, but then 30 secs later you have NO at #1 and picked to win the super bowl. Also SF at number 6, i agree they'll win the division but i wouldn't have them in the top 15 personally but thats your opinion. Also maybe you could only do the top 15 teams perhaps giving you more time to elaborate, it seemed like you had to talk fast in order to just get a few seconds in on each team, it seemed like right when you were about to make a point the screen changed to a different team. Otherwise well done, nice suit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 04:01 PM

Thank you all for your feedback, I appreciate it. I figured you guys would be honest and tell me what my faults were. I am definitely gonna work on them so my future videos can be better. As for me rushing, it was because I only had 17 seconds between each team so I had to get everything in quick lol, but I have an idea to get around that for my future videos. Once again, thanks for your feedback guys.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 07:55 PM

Promise that you'll leave the bracelet at home. You look like a Persian cabbie with that shit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:34 PM

Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Posted 31 August 2010 - 02:53 AM

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Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Thanks Clutch, I know I repeated myself too much as well...you guys cant imagine how nervous I was. I have a new found respect for those guys on ESPN and NFL Network. Especially because of the hidden pressures involved. Most people think its just sitting there and talking but its not that simple, you have to get your point across in X time and I did it all off the top of my head...not bad for my first time. (Thats what she said).

As for my Miami ranking, I need to see Henne do something before I drink the Kool-Aid. I am a Michigan fan and I didnt like him then, and I still dont like him. The same shit I heard about him then (strong arm, break out year) I hear now with him. Thats why I said show me something lol.
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