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Chaos Icon : (29 September 2014 - 09:57 PM) fuck that penalty
Chaos Icon : (29 September 2014 - 09:57 PM) "going on your knees" stupidest shit ever
Chaos Icon : (29 September 2014 - 09:57 PM) let them do the end zone celebrations
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 09:59 PM) thank you KC for slaughtering these overrated fucks
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 09:59 PM) Brady watching too much geno tape
Chaos Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:00 PM) brady to the bench
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:00 PM) Oh god what has KC done! GARAPAPOLLO UNLEASHED
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:01 PM) I hope someone lays a Mo Lewis on Garapapolo
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:01 PM) square in the chest
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:02 PM) so brady can get his knee broken again
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:03 PM) I'm scared
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:03 PM) this kid might be legit
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:04 PM) IT WASNT WORTH IT
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:04 PM) cmon KC
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:04 PM) wtf
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:04 PM) f***
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:04 PM) they let the rookie just drive it on them
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:05 PM) unacceptable
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:05 PM) now KC needs a TD
santana Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:06 PM) It wasn't worth it :(
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:15 PM) KC has some big ol boys
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:19 PM) TY KC for bringing these overrated fucks back down to earth
azjetfan Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:22 PM) I think 03 should be a mod. I think everyone should be.
azjetfan Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:23 PM) What do we have to loose?
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:34 PM) our O better get their shit together starting this Sunday
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:34 PM) we need to be on our A game when we play Denver and the CHEATriots
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:34 PM) and Buffalo doesn't scare me
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 10:34 PM) but these next 3 games better get it's shit together
ganggreen2003 Icon : (29 September 2014 - 11:01 PM) maybe Idzik knew that MEvis was not as good anymore
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 08:11 AM) Nah, fire idzik
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 08:12 AM) Milber is expected to play this week, how nice of him
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 08:14 AM) The chargers are going to be tough
Jetsfan115 Icon : (Yesterday, 10:22 AM) well there is a silver lining to this season, tom brady sucks and so do the pats
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 11:48 AM) Jets sign John Conner back, with Bohannon injured at FB
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 11:49 AM) that is why they should consider starting Vick, they could compete for the divsion with solid QB play. Can Rex really afford to sit there waiting for things to click with Geno while he keeps throwing INTs?
Jetsfan115 Icon : (Yesterday, 12:26 PM) i didn't even notive bohannon was hurt
Jetsfan115 Icon : (Yesterday, 12:28 PM) vick gives us a chance to win now, geno can still learn as a backup
santana Icon : (Yesterday, 01:28 PM) I miss T Bo already
ganggreen2003 Icon : (Yesterday, 02:35 PM) The raiders are a dumpster fire
ganggreen2003 Icon : (Yesterday, 02:36 PM) they are naming Tony Sparano yes that Tony Sparano formally the OC of the NYJ and the wildcat whacko from Miami is the new interim HC for the Oakland Gayders
ganggreen2003 Icon : (Yesterday, 02:39 PM) well good thing we got rid of LaRon Landry since he just got suspended for PED's
Jetsfan115 Icon : (Yesterday, 03:08 PM) i'm not suprised. that guy looked like he was on roids
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (Yesterday, 06:10 PM) FIRE IDZIK
Chaos Icon : (Today, 09:37 AM) fantasy help - Rivers and DJax for Dez and Tannehill? i'll be getting dez and tannehill. i'm the one proposing the trade.
Chaos Icon : (Today, 09:41 AM) i have brees starting. they have eli.
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Posted 29 August 2010 - 11:16 PM

On weekends I work for www.footballgameplan.com and today I filmed my first video. I was very nervous so I ended up forgetting some of my material and also excuse my stuttering lol. I just want some feedback from you guys so I can get better with each video I film.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:23 AM

Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:40 AM

[quote name='Rhodes1991' date='30 August 2010 - 01:23 AM' timestamp='1283145781' post='308741']
Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Thanks Rhodes, I was thinking the exact same thing. I also did a NCAA Top 25 video that came out better actually because I was less nervous. Once its available, I'll post it up. My next NFL Power Rankings wont be up till after week 1 though. I'll post them as I do them. Thanks again for your feedback. I welcome any and all constructive criticism.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 09:38 AM

Maybe we have more fans here that want to try this also . so I put up this page but it is dated in 2008 . My opinion is when ESPN came out in 1979-80 I watched it but couldn't grasp the concept of sports 24/7/ 365 on TV . So Maybe history will repeat it self with Football game plan on the internet. Having a partner to bounce your opinions off of may be a better way to sell your opinions as credible . If you believe in this than follow your Dream.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:31 AM

Not bad. Here are few things I noticed:

1. Slow... down... take... a breath... or... a pause... you're... talkingwaytoofastcauseyou'renervous.
2. Stop saying the word "just".
3. WTF is up with you bopping your head?
4. Use your hands a little bit with your analysis. You look ackward as hell with your hands just clasped on your desk. Use them a tad for emphasis.
5. Real men don't wear bracelets.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:42 AM

Probably worth breaking something this up into 3 sections. Makes it so you can elaborate more on each team, and not be in such a hurry.

Not bad though man, good work.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 01:23 PM

you said you believe the cowboys are the best team in the NFC, but then 30 secs later you have NO at #1 and picked to win the super bowl. Also SF at number 6, i agree they'll win the division but i wouldn't have them in the top 15 personally but thats your opinion. Also maybe you could only do the top 15 teams perhaps giving you more time to elaborate, it seemed like you had to talk fast in order to just get a few seconds in on each team, it seemed like right when you were about to make a point the screen changed to a different team. Otherwise well done, nice suit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 04:01 PM

Thank you all for your feedback, I appreciate it. I figured you guys would be honest and tell me what my faults were. I am definitely gonna work on them so my future videos can be better. As for me rushing, it was because I only had 17 seconds between each team so I had to get everything in quick lol, but I have an idea to get around that for my future videos. Once again, thanks for your feedback guys.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 07:55 PM

Promise that you'll leave the bracelet at home. You look like a Persian cabbie with that shit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:34 PM

Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Posted 31 August 2010 - 02:53 AM

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Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Thanks Clutch, I know I repeated myself too much as well...you guys cant imagine how nervous I was. I have a new found respect for those guys on ESPN and NFL Network. Especially because of the hidden pressures involved. Most people think its just sitting there and talking but its not that simple, you have to get your point across in X time and I did it all off the top of my head...not bad for my first time. (Thats what she said).

As for my Miami ranking, I need to see Henne do something before I drink the Kool-Aid. I am a Michigan fan and I didnt like him then, and I still dont like him. The same shit I heard about him then (strong arm, break out year) I hear now with him. Thats why I said show me something lol.
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