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Jetsfan115 Icon : (12 June 2015 - 02:22 PM) Jets sign free agent OT Charlles Brown
azjetfan Icon : (14 June 2015 - 01:48 PM) We won't be able to backload it. He won't accept the offer. Keep in mind he requested he release because they couldn't come to an agreement on a raise.
azjetfan Icon : (14 June 2015 - 01:49 PM) He is probably looking for $7 million or more per year.
Jetsfan115 Icon : (15 June 2015 - 09:44 AM) he was only making 5.5 million this year. we can give him 10 mil signing bonus onf a 5 year deal and a low base salary (like 3 mil a year) it'll average out to 5 mil a year, but he'll get 13 million this year (more then double) and will cost 5 mil a year against the cap for the rest of the deal
2JBallar01 Icon : (15 June 2015 - 02:17 PM) Any news on Mathis at all? Haven't heard anything since his release.
2JBallar01 Icon : (15 June 2015 - 02:17 PM) Also, Sam Baker was cut today as well
santana Icon : (16 June 2015 - 04:52 PM) Titans releasing RB Shonn Greene
MikeGangGree... Icon : (16 June 2015 - 10:40 PM) TEH WARRIORS
santana Icon : (16 June 2015 - 11:08 PM) This trophy ceremony awkward as fuck I had to turn it off
Mr_Jet Icon : (17 June 2015 - 08:02 PM) It really was. It was more Doris Burke interviewing the Warriors than it was a trophy ceremony. Plus Adam Silver forgot to hand the Warriors owner the trophy after he was done talking to the crowd.
Mr_Jet Icon : (17 June 2015 - 08:03 PM) R.I.P. Stuart Scott
MikeGangGree... Icon : (17 June 2015 - 10:05 PM) FIRE SILVER
MikeGangGree... Icon : (17 June 2015 - 10:05 PM) FIRE BURKE
MikeGangGree... Icon : (19 June 2015 - 06:27 PM) THE A-ROD!!
santana Icon : (26 June 2015 - 12:19 PM) god damn week no activity in here
santana Icon : (26 June 2015 - 12:20 PM) might have to chop this table up into fire wood
santana Icon : (26 June 2015 - 12:26 PM) FIRE WOOD!
Mr_Jet Icon : (26 June 2015 - 05:54 PM) Kristaps Porzingis???
Mr_Jet Icon : (26 June 2015 - 05:55 PM) You'd think Isiah Thomas was still running the Knicks last night.
santana Icon : (27 June 2015 - 07:30 PM) Lol yeah no clue about those names
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (28 June 2015 - 10:10 AM) Is there any chance that Porzingis ends up being good?
Jetsfan0099 Icon : (28 June 2015 - 10:10 AM) I'm guessing he won't be the next Pau Gasol or Dirk Nowviski
Mr_Jet Icon : (28 June 2015 - 11:41 AM) You never know, he could be as good as Gasol brothers or Dirk. Honestly the Knicks picking at #4 did the same thing the 3 teams picking ahead of them did. Picked a 19 year who could go boom or bust.
Mr_Jet Icon : (28 June 2015 - 11:45 AM) Porzingis seems to have the "I'm going to prove them wrong" type of attitude needed to overcome people's doubts about him. Hopefully he'll have the work ethic that goes along with that attitude.
azjetfan Icon : (28 June 2015 - 10:17 PM) In other news I decided to shave the dome. Since the hair was falling out anyway I figured I would show it who's boss
santana Icon : (29 June 2015 - 01:11 PM) Deisel up shave the dome
Mr_Jet Icon : (29 June 2015 - 04:49 PM) Welcome home.
azjetfan Icon : (29 June 2015 - 08:59 PM) I feel fast.
azjetfan Icon : (01 July 2015 - 07:53 PM) Shot an 86 today. Personal best.
santana Icon : (01 July 2015 - 08:19 PM) well done
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blk_orion Icon : (02 July 2015 - 08:57 AM) play what? golf?
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santana Icon : (02 July 2015 - 07:55 PM) tiger shot a 66 today didnt he easy course though
santana Icon : (02 July 2015 - 07:55 PM) things were going too well for the jets this off season
MikeGangGree... Icon : (02 July 2015 - 10:33 PM) Well I guess Williams will be starting in opening day now
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Posted 29 August 2010 - 11:16 PM

On weekends I work for www.footballgameplan.com and today I filmed my first video. I was very nervous so I ended up forgetting some of my material and also excuse my stuttering lol. I just want some feedback from you guys so I can get better with each video I film.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:23 AM

Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 12:40 AM

[quote name='Rhodes1991' date='30 August 2010 - 01:23 AM' timestamp='1283145781' post='308741']
Not bad considering it's your first video. I believe that if you slow yourself down just a bit, and really collect your thoughts for your next video it will be good. Maybe provide a bit more info on ALL the teams. What I mean by this is, for example, when you said the Vikings have issues at receiver. Yeah, but why? Now I do know that it's because of Percy Harvin's migraines, and Sidney Rice's hip injury that will keep him out for a significant period of time. That doesn't mean Joe Football Fan will know when he is watching your video. Like you said, you were nervous and forgot your material, but post next weeks video too. I'm interested.

Keep it up I suppose.
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Thanks Rhodes, I was thinking the exact same thing. I also did a NCAA Top 25 video that came out better actually because I was less nervous. Once its available, I'll post it up. My next NFL Power Rankings wont be up till after week 1 though. I'll post them as I do them. Thanks again for your feedback. I welcome any and all constructive criticism.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 09:38 AM

Maybe we have more fans here that want to try this also . so I put up this page but it is dated in 2008 . My opinion is when ESPN came out in 1979-80 I watched it but couldn't grasp the concept of sports 24/7/ 365 on TV . So Maybe history will repeat it self with Football game plan on the internet. Having a partner to bounce your opinions off of may be a better way to sell your opinions as credible . If you believe in this than follow your Dream.

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:31 AM

Not bad. Here are few things I noticed:

1. Slow... down... take... a breath... or... a pause... you're... talkingwaytoofastcauseyou'renervous.
2. Stop saying the word "just".
3. WTF is up with you bopping your head?
4. Use your hands a little bit with your analysis. You look ackward as hell with your hands just clasped on your desk. Use them a tad for emphasis.
5. Real men don't wear bracelets.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:42 AM

Probably worth breaking something this up into 3 sections. Makes it so you can elaborate more on each team, and not be in such a hurry.

Not bad though man, good work.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 01:23 PM

you said you believe the cowboys are the best team in the NFC, but then 30 secs later you have NO at #1 and picked to win the super bowl. Also SF at number 6, i agree they'll win the division but i wouldn't have them in the top 15 personally but thats your opinion. Also maybe you could only do the top 15 teams perhaps giving you more time to elaborate, it seemed like you had to talk fast in order to just get a few seconds in on each team, it seemed like right when you were about to make a point the screen changed to a different team. Otherwise well done, nice suit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 04:01 PM

Thank you all for your feedback, I appreciate it. I figured you guys would be honest and tell me what my faults were. I am definitely gonna work on them so my future videos can be better. As for me rushing, it was because I only had 17 seconds between each team so I had to get everything in quick lol, but I have an idea to get around that for my future videos. Once again, thanks for your feedback guys.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 07:55 PM

Promise that you'll leave the bracelet at home. You look like a Persian cabbie with that shit.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:34 PM

Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Posted 31 August 2010 - 02:53 AM

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Dolphins too low :). You're not convinced of way too much. Good start though.
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Thanks Clutch, I know I repeated myself too much as well...you guys cant imagine how nervous I was. I have a new found respect for those guys on ESPN and NFL Network. Especially because of the hidden pressures involved. Most people think its just sitting there and talking but its not that simple, you have to get your point across in X time and I did it all off the top of my head...not bad for my first time. (Thats what she said).

As for my Miami ranking, I need to see Henne do something before I drink the Kool-Aid. I am a Michigan fan and I didnt like him then, and I still dont like him. The same shit I heard about him then (strong arm, break out year) I hear now with him. Thats why I said show me something lol.
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